Kia ora bloggers today, I have been making a story about three pictures. You have to make a relationship between the pictures, in the story. It has 502 words and 2570 characters, my second longest story, all off only 3 pictures. I have reread it twice but if there are and spelling or grammar mistakes please tell me in your comment. Hope you enjoy my story. Blog ya later, Luka out.
Ka pai Luka! What a great adventure story, full of twists and turns. You have used many great descriptive words to paint a vivid picture for me, the reader. I felt the panic of those crows as time was running out. I particularly like your description of the girl on the horse ‘she had a red riding hood cloak, blue jeans like the colour of the sky on a sunny day and tanned skin. Great simile use! Maybe next time delete all the slides that don't have your writing on them. This way it will read like a book. I am looking forward to your next story. Blog you later.
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