kai ora This is my one hundred word story it was very hard to make it. it is exactly one hundred words
Once there was a kid whose name was Harry he was eight . He was very interested in cars but his family was quite poor. His family encouraged his interest in cars. One Christmas his family gathered enough money to buy the parts to make a car. Every day after school he made a bit of it for five hours there were no instructions at all. In one and a half years he had made the car. It wasn't flash but it worked. He sold it so he could buy another one. When he was older he became a car designer.
how long do you think that it would take you to make. I hope that you a good time reading it, blog ya later
Kia Ora Luka,
ReplyDeleteShannon from Room 7
Your story was very nice it has a lot of detail in it. How were they poor but then was like sorta rich at Christmas, it's still a great story.
Blog ya later!
Shannon :)
Hi Luka,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story. It reminds me of my cousin who loves cars. I like it that you put a lot of detail in it. Maybe next time you could the title catchier to grab people's attention. It was still very good though.
Blog ya later,
Bhargavi